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Title: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Eject on 28/10/2013, 03:00 PM Wanted to throw these up somewhere and I thought here I can get feedback on how im doing commentary wise, not amazing but practice makes perfect. Im awaiting the verbal bludgeoning, so let me know what you think and how I can improve. Cheers (ill put up what i have so far here)
Highlight Style Videos: (These ones I feel are bad because I was attempting to keep it somewhat clean and my friend wasnt talking a whole lot, so im just going to link them) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mm-4PAQR1Dk http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MFSmR8LikA Lets Play-esque: SCP Containment Breach http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rVJh02bIooc http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VMa_JTODAzM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JdSUKjJoDdg Amnesia http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5A3PHpYMpc http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gzObl6Aezz4 Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: mandatory05 on 28/10/2013, 10:43 PM When he comes through the wall in episode 3, I have never laughed so hard in my life hahahaha
Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Number One on 29/10/2013, 06:38 PM can i just say ,, each episode needs a intro and outro.
Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Eject on 29/10/2013, 07:52 PM When he comes through the wall in episode 3, I have never laughed so hard in my life hahahaha If you enjoyed that, theres more to come haha. can i just say ,, each episode needs a intro and outro. Yeah I havent been doing them as of yet just because I havent had anyone watching, but I just released this one this morning, and it has an intro and outro, but i have to work on them. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvHUYSaVTkk Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Alucard on 30/10/2013, 04:48 AM the outro is good it is the standard one gives the watcher enough info about your other vids. the intro i think i missed it. was it that bit with the remix?
considering your name for this, maybe an eject symbol and a small clip of things ejecting.... then show what your reviewing.... and if it is a part 1 or something... Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Eject on 30/10/2013, 05:31 PM the outro is good it is the standard one gives the watcher enough info about your other vids. the intro i think i missed it. was it that bit with the remix? considering your name for this, maybe an eject symbol and a small clip of things ejecting.... then show what your reviewing.... and if it is a part 1 or something... The bit the with remix? In the saints one? If so, thats just a copyright avoiding cutscene lol. After about a minute proper intro (I include a fail first) comes in. So maybe an animated intro of some? Title: Re: Ejects Terribad Videos Post by: Eject on 13/11/2013, 07:32 PM Some more vids incoming :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KRORIsunK74 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMLSQL3srAM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jBTj6B27qCk http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X7hmoL_DkYQ |